Rainsford became more scared and scared hearing the leaves crack. General zaroff became closer and closer to him.General zaroff stopped right before stumbling over rainsford and lights a cigerett and then slowly turns around and walks away.Almost as he knew someone was around.
Many cause and effect relationships such as. Zaroff hunted rainsford because rainsford didnt want to hunt.Rainsford refused to hunt because Zaroff was going to hunt humans. Rainsford thought that was in humane and refused to hunt.The only reason he wanted to hunt humans was because it was harderand more challenging.And the reason he hunted him was because he didnt want to hunt.
Rainsford and general zaroff both had different opinions about hunting humans.Zaroff became bored hunting animals so he started to hunt humans."If i wish to hunt why not? I hunt the scum of the earth sailors from tramp ships-lasers-blocks-chinese-whites-mongols-a thught bred horse or bound is worth more of a score of them"(27)Rainsford knew he was trapped so he hunted zaroff. Rainsford knew that zaroff wasnt going to stop hunting him any time soon.So he turns around and comes backto hunt zaroff by himself.Rainsford decides to hunt Zaroff "I am still a beast at bay"he said in a low hoarse voice"Get ready general Zaroff"(36)rainsford kew there was no way of gettig out of this so he went in Zaroffs room and fought him so he had a way to get off the island.
In the story "The most dangerous game cause and effect is a big deal and causes alot of suspence!Zaroff becomes bored with hunting animals so starts to hunt humans. He hunted Rainsford only because he didnt want to hunt humans with him so he turned his back on him.This story great it created alot of suspence because of all the cause and effect relationships.
Loved it a few suggestions though. Check spelling and capitlization. In the first sentence reread it though maybe. And after that when you site a quote put (Connell page whatever it is). Other than that good story loved it as well just put it on word and find corections.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Rachelle. You don’t have much to do other then proofread. I don’t know how much it matters but you only have four paragraphs. I would separate the second to last paragraph. Good essay.
ReplyDeleteAce! sorry to tell ya, but you need an introduction:( because im not really liking the beginning of your story. but other than that pretty good (: well bye
ReplyDeletePs. i also like the green backround on your page the color of your lettering. way cool (;
You need an introduction. But you also need to find a page because coneel whatever dosnt work.
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